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Old 17th April 2007, 03:45 AM   #1
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Dissolution of Sentience Encompassing

This is the creativity section, so I believe it's appropriate to post this here. Anyway, this is my most recent poem. It's not my best, it's blank/free verse, and the content isn't for everybody, and it may appear biased against religion (though, it's not meant to be) but I really don't feel like sorting through a multitude of poem archives. So, here it is:

Dissolution of Sentience Encompassing

It is time for a new standard
a new canvas
and a new artist

Tetragrammaton is in binds
Fetters of Saturn and PlastiCuffs of Hermaon.
Ratiocination belies external virtue
as dissonance reigns internally

Within the procession echoes
Psalm 23, the hollow comfort
of the rifle and abortion table.
Decadence concludes in a shrill tongue.

What festivals of atonement
or sacred game shall we have to invent?
To appear worthy, we sheep amongst dying wolves
must become wolves to appear worthy of it.

God is dead.
God remains dead.
And we have killed him.

Tetragrammaton: the sephirah tree without roots
The anti-thesis Tree of Life
A fitting ritual for a dying God.

Abraxas issues forth providence
What is the death of the God of Jews?
364 remain, utilitarianism calls.

Paul of Tarsus evangelizes in his heavenly Basilicia
What is the death of Phoenician mystery?
Plemora exists, and is therefore accountable.

Horus ushers the new age with haste
What is to grieve?
Him and his embellishment of a son

Baphomet is love and life of union
What is dissolution to the 15th Major Arcana?
What of the SOLVE and COAGULA?

Metatron consults the Sigillum Dei Aemeth
What of the Cube of Life?
The Vitruvian Man, Fibonacci, and the 13 staccatos

Satan displays Thessalonians with pride
Reliance on Revelations is marred
It's the knowledge known since Corinthians.

Jesus becomes the messiah of Camalot
Deistic beliefs surmount to nihility
The axis sways, dualism falls

Zoroaster does not act
For what reasons do the divine fall?
He concedes to doubt and reflection

The Anti-Christ, bearer of Kafir, and stasis within Daniel
When is the utterance of 7:7?
It merely contemplates

Adam attains Sephirah
Sephirah becomes fatalism in absence of essense
Fatalism begots nothing

Adam becomes nullity
He burns the cross to provide divulgement
His baguette-hinge face opens
like a marionette.

Tetragrammaton begots nullity
The Holy Ghost: fuel for the motorcade
Institution is the procession.

"Forgive them, for they know not what they do."
Reality needs an enema

The world ends, without not a scream
but a whisper
Who says madness isn't the purest enlightment?

The edge of Godhead and Insanity
is a blurred line
Ponder upon the inhabitants of the periphery
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